Thursday, April 23, 2020

Narrative - Giving each other feedback and feedforward

This week we each wrote a narrative, with the prompt of a stranded island.

Here is our planning template.

After completeing our writing, we each blogged it and then had to go and read each othres and give them feedback and feedback (one thing they did well, and one thing to work on next time/to improve on).

First we read Miss Ashley's narrative.

Then we gave her feedback based on the table of ideas we came up with ages ago in class.

Then we went to read each others, and everybody gave everybody feedback via the comments section of blogger or by comments in Google Docs. 


















3 comments:

  1. Well done Room 8!
    What a great way to practise your commenting skills on others' blog. No doubt, you have also been stretching your literacy knowledge to reflect on the text you are reading and giving feedback and feedforward. This is a great skill and ability to gain not only as a learner but also as a teacher.
    Keep up your great work, Room 8. Very proud of you!

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  2. good work Room 8,
    What some fantastic and positive comments you have gave to each other.

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  3. Good work room 8 for doing the amazing work during this lockdown and keep it up room 8 good work

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