Good start Stanley! You remembered your paragraphs this time, yus!
Your events are in order which is good, you have also got the who/what/when/where. Awesome.
Next steps - adding more detail to your writing, such as how you felt or what/who distracted you.
Stanley T @ Tamaki Primary School: my recount: On monday 20 th feb 2017 My class had a spelling test in the classroom I grabbed a book to lean on because I didn't want to sit on the ...
We are year 7/8 learners at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, New Zealand and our teacher is Miss Ashley.
my name is stanley you just need more detail but awesome and cool at the same time.
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