Lydia this is a great recount, yes I know it was a boring topic, but you have made it interesting by using adjectives, similes and dialogue (talking).
Next steps - don't use 'like' as a sentence starter, and maybe adding in who else was there (for example, my friend Hevani was sitting next to me, and I could tell she was bored too because of how she kept sighing).
Lydia @ Tamaki Primary School: The Worst Spelling Test Ever!: Hey guys. Today room 7 done a practice test about our spelling test. Give me some feedback on what you think about it. Bye! Test: T...
We are year 7/8 learners at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, New Zealand and our teacher is Miss Ashley.
Lidia this is a awesome recount i would love to see more from you.
ReplyDeleteLidia this is a awesome recount i would love to see more from you.
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