Sunday, February 19, 2017

Stanley T @ Tamaki Primary School: my recount

Good start Stanley! You remembered your paragraphs this time, yus! 
Your events are in order which is good, you have also got the who/what/when/where. Awesome. 
Next steps - adding more detail to your writing, such as how you felt or what/who distracted you.

Stanley T @ Tamaki Primary School: my recount: On monday 20 th feb 2017 My class had a spelling test in the classroom I grabbed a book to lean on because I didn't want to sit on the ...

1 comment:

  1. my name is stanley you just need more detail but awesome and cool at the same time.