Monday, August 14, 2017

Narrative writing T3W4

Today we started learning about narratives. 

We have all learnt about narratives before, so we knew something about them. The most important thing with narratives, is that they have a problem and a solution. 

Firstly, Miss Ashley told us oral narratives (telling them out loud, instead of writing them down). 
We gave our ideas for characters, settings and problems, and she made up a random story about them.

Next, we acted out our own narratives, using characters/settings/problems that the class came up with.

Here is our creations.


On the last one, Miss Ashley wrote down exactly what was narrated (said).

One fine sunny morning, there was 2 dogs. They were playing. They were really good friends, as they were brother and sister. ‘Wooooof’ growled one dog. Then one day, two people came. ‘Which dog do you want?’ said one of them. Kika wanted a dog, and chose the dog called Grace. GRace didn’t know what was going on, and felt sad at that moment, but she went to her new owner. Her brother didn’t know, he was still sleeping. The new owner, and her mum, walked away. The brother woke up, and he looked everywhere for his sister. She wasn’t there. He got angry. He got crazy. ‘WOO WOO WOO’ he cried for his sister.

So the new owner and the mum went to the markets to get some food. ‘Okay, elts eat’ said the mum. The brother dog was still looking for his sister. He looked like a scary gorilla. He looked at the owner and the mum. He looked straight in their eyes. He barked and barked. WOOO WOO WOO. They got really scared. They called pet control, and pet control.
Amon was biting them into pieces, and then he ran away.

10 years later… the brother was still looking for his sister. He was so old. He finally saw his sister! He was so happy. They both went together and started playing. They were so excited.


15 comments:

  1. i really like doing this because it was so fun working with people i don't really want to work this. and i like how everyone act in there plays

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  2. I Loved doing this it was so fun but maybe we should try and be more confident in our words and speak up.

    -Edith :P :D

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  3. i love how you made that plan it is very cool and funny and it show lot of detail and i love how you guys get into charters and start to act it very amazing keep it up.

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  4. I really enjoyed doing this, this was amazing I really layghed alot watching the plays it was funny I really wished that we could do this again... Can we Miss Ashley please?

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  5. Hi, I really enjoyed watching this and how yous were keeping the person who you were acting like it was so awesome keep it up!

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  6. Hi Rm 7, I have really enjoined this and great job to everyone for contributing an participating during the lesson and That well done to everyone for being so confidence to perform in front the class and maybe next time if the narrators can speak up because some of the performing was a bit loud and sometimes I couldn't hear it but beside everything I just say , I just want to say a HUGE WELL DONE TO EVERYONE!!! KEEP IT Up
    (: Grace

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  7. I like all of the groups because they were all funny Good job

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  8. i like all of your groups and i think that they worked really well together. good job room 7 😉😉😉😉

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  9. Hi Rm7,
    I really like this idea of acting out your story it kinda just puts a picture in your head while you're acting. I think this is a great idea especially in narrative writing.

    -Lydia

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  10. i like that video that was so cool

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  11. Hi Room 7,
    This was really cool to do, and it is a very smart idea

    -Lydia

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  12. Hi Room 7,
    I reaally enjoyed doing this it was amazing and funny I espically like our one the kong one it was funny I really enjoyed this time, hope we could do it again

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  13. Hi Room 7 (me)
    i loved how You (we) did n amazing job and how it was funny and amazing i really want to do it again

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